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Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Posted: 22 Apr 2013 09:36 PM PDT
Writing is simply a matter of expressing ideas, but as we all know, it’s not so simple after all. One challenge is to coherently connect those ideas. This post lists ten categories of words and phrases one can employ to signal a transition, with several examples for each type.
These words and phrases can be used within a sentence as well as at the beginning. Note, too, that many can apply to more than one category. (These groupings are arbitrary, created for the sake of presentation; transitional terms can be organized in various ways.)
1. Addition
“Also, I have to stop at the store on the way home.”
“Besides, it would give me great satisfaction to help you.”
“First, I’d like to thank you for inviting me to speak tonight.”
2. Comparison
“In the same way, the author foreshadows a conflict between two minor characters.”
“Likewise, the sequel was very successful.”
“Similarly, we observed no differences in response rate.”
3. Concession
“Granted, you did not ask ahead of time.”
“Naturally, the final decision is up to her.”
“Of course, he will want to examine the documents himself.”
4. Contrast
“At the same time, what she said has some truth to it.”
“However, I don’t see what that has to do with anything.”
“Otherwise, how can they expect us to comply?”
5. Consequence
“Accordingly, I have consulted with him for a second opinion.”
“As a result, I’m not sure what to do.”
“For this reason, we have decided to halt the project.”
6. Emphasis
“Above all, we must exercise discretion.”
“Certainly, he’ll find out for himself in time.”
“In fact, they’re on their way right now.”
7. Example
“For example, he could have asked for advice first.”
“In particular, I draw your attention to the stain on the carpet.”
“Namely, consider the consequences of your decision.”
8. Sequence
“Earlier, you had mentioned a report.”
“Eventually, we’ll see some improvement.”
“Meanwhile, I’ve been waiting for you.”
9. Space
“Below, you’ll find instructions for assembling the shelf.”
“In the distance, he could see the approaching figure.”
“Off to one side, she noticed a package wrapped in plain paper.”
10. Summary
“In conclusion, I see no reason to delay any longer.”
“In other words, they’re incompetent.”
“Therefore, your decision leaves me no choice.”

Friday, April 19, 2013

English 11 week of April 22


 Monday – finishing The Pit and the Pendulum. Turn in Rhetorical feature, Theme, and Purpose sheet.

Tuesday  and Wednesday – Officer Rick Smiedendorf will be conducting hourly workshops with all 11th grade students (during English 11 classes) on Tuesday, April 23.  The following day April 24, the students will be involved in a simulated driving activity to be conducted in the north parking lot during each English 11 class period. 

Thursday – wrap up The Pit and the Pendulum analysis. Turn in analysis.

Friday – Read The Raven (298) and Poe’s Process (302). Answer question #8 (303) and the Literary Focus (303)

Thursday, April 11, 2013

English 11 week of April 15


By Friday – visit the Edgar Allan Poe museum website: http://www.poemuseum.org/students.php

1.     Read an overview of Poe’s life
2.     Try the Fact or Fiction quiz and email your results AND one thing you learned about Poe.


Monday – listen to The Minister’s Black Veil. Begin vocabulary.
Tuesday- complete and turn in Minister’s Black Veil vocabulary.
Wednesday – Edgar Allan Poe – the Pit and the Pendulum.
Thursday – Complete story map for the Pit and the Pendulum.
Friday- Listen to The Raven by Poe

Monday, April 8, 2013

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button

You can download a PDF of the story by google searching and finding this: PDF] 

THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON By F Scott Fitzgerald ...

www.thoughtaudio.com/...Button/FITZGERALD_BENJAMINBUTTON.pdf - Cached
THE CURIOUS CASE OF BENJAMIN BUTTON. By F Scott Fitzgerald. I. As long
ago as 1860 it was the proper thing to be born at home. At present, so I am told, ...


Audio:
Part One:
 http://ia700401.us.archive.org/1/items/selected_stories_fitzgerald_0902_librivox/selectedstories_07_fitzgerald_64kb.mp3

Part Two:
http://ia700401.us.archive.org/1/items/selected_stories_fitzgerald_0902_librivox/selectedstories_08_fitzgerald_64kb.mp3

Quiz:



Email me your quiz results  - both # correct out of 11 and the (%), and the time you took to take the quiz.